I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora, It's Harmony and Azalea from Kaikohe West School We loved your presentation and your photo of yourself. We also really like how you covered up the mailbox address and the car's license plate. It would be really nice if you had more information about yourself. (But Not To Much)`
Hi this is Shadae & Gerrat from the KWS.What you have done well is introducing your self.We have read your blog as you have a sigh of your school name and your car maybe next time if you can introduce more about your self and more information. check our blogs out http://kwsshadaew.blogspot.com/ & kwsgerrat.blogspot.com
Kia ora Tiannahh my name is Ocean from Kaikohe West School.I really like the way you took a photo of yourself and I loved the presentation to. Next time you should add a little more information about yourself but not to much. If you want to check my blog here is the link http://kws-ocean-lee.blogspot.com/
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora,
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We loved your presentation and your photo of yourself.
We also really like how you covered up the mailbox address and the car's license plate.
It would be really nice if you had more information about yourself. (But Not To Much)`
Hi this is Shadae & Gerrat from the KWS.What you have done well is introducing your self.We have read your blog as you have a sigh of your school name and your car maybe next time if you can introduce more about your self and more information.
ReplyDeletecheck our blogs out http://kwsshadaew.blogspot.com/ & kwsgerrat.blogspot.com
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Tiannahh my name is Ocean from Kaikohe West School.I really like the way you took a photo of yourself and I loved the presentation to. Next time you should add a little more information about yourself but not to much. If you want to check my blog here is the link http://kws-ocean-lee.blogspot.com/
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