I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Tiannah! Thank you for sharing your poems. I like how you stuck to a dog theme for all of them, and you have used the structures for each poem well.
Tena koe Tiannah, its Ruqayat your fellow classmate. I never knew there were this many different poems. Its very intriguing. I also like like your poems. they are very interesting and make sense. Good job.
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Kia ora Tiannah! Thank you for sharing your poems. I like how you stuck to a dog theme for all of them, and you have used the structures for each poem well.
ReplyDeleteTena koe Tiannah, its Ruqayat your fellow classmate. I never knew there were this many different poems. Its very intriguing. I also like like your poems. they are very interesting and make sense. Good job.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards ~
Ruqayat