I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Mīharo, amazing work Tiannah! These cookies sound delicious. I love how you have designed your recipe book and even written a blurb on the back. Have you made these cookies before?
Tena koe Tiannah, its Ruqayat from you class. I really like your book about how to make cookie brownies. The cookie brownies looked delicious. I hope that one day I will get the chance to try it on day. Ka pai!
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Mīharo, amazing work Tiannah! These cookies sound delicious. I love how you have designed your recipe book and even written a blurb on the back. Have you made these cookies before?
ReplyDeleteTena koe Tiannah, its Ruqayat from you class. I really like your book about how to make cookie brownies. The cookie brownies looked delicious. I hope that one day I will get the chance to try it on day. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteYours Truly ~
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