I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Tiannahh my name is Harley. I really like the way that you created a picture of a budgie floating out to sea it's really funny.Maybe next time you could make a video of that bird trying to escape a storm on that cookie boat.
Hello Tiannah We are Limihai and Tuamelie We Liked the Budgie On a cookie boat with a red flag and it is kind of funny and I liked How you create the picture and The cookie Looks Really Yum. By EHS Tuamelie and Limihai.
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I love your budgie on the cookie boat, it's funny!
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Iris
Kia ora Tiannahh my name is Harley. I really like the way that you created a picture of a budgie floating out to sea it's really funny.Maybe next time you could make a video of that bird trying to escape a storm on that cookie boat.
ReplyDeleteI like the budgie on a cookie
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Hi Tiannahh my name is Georgia I'm from Matawai school I like your work.
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I like the budgie on a cookie boat.I like the colours of the budgie.
ReplyDeleteI hope you see my blog.
Baylee.
Kia ora.We are Sione and Tuamelie from EHS.We like the way you edit your photo as you wanted it.Ka Kite Have a good weekend.
ReplyDeleteHello Tiannah We are Limihai and Tuamelie We Liked the Budgie On a cookie boat with a red flag and it is kind of funny and I liked How you create the picture and The cookie Looks Really Yum.
ReplyDeleteBy EHS Tuamelie and Limihai.
I like the cookie boat with the parot on it
ReplyDeleteit is cool how you got a cookie base for the boat.
ReplyDeleteWow nice cookie boat :D
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