I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka mau te wehi, an awesome effort Tiannah! I like how you thought about how the vessel floats and moves, and what you might modify next time. If you could sail anywhere in the world, where would you go?
Very creative approach, Tiannah. I liked the way you have used everyday objects to create a boat that actually floats. Next step: is there a way you can improve the design to make it go forward instead of going backwards?
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Ka mau te wehi, an awesome effort Tiannah! I like how you thought about how the vessel floats and moves, and what you might modify next time. If you could sail anywhere in the world, where would you go?
ReplyDeleteVery creative approach, Tiannah. I liked the way you have used everyday objects to create a boat that actually floats. Next step: is there a way you can improve the design to make it go forward instead of going backwards?
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