I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Tiannah. How are you and you family. I read the post that you and Priththika wrote on what you thought of Israel Adesanya's speech. I haven't heard it so it made me want to go and have a look. I'm glad you enjoyed it and it was great the advice you gave, especially about more descriptive words. It shows that you listened to him carefully. Bronca
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Tiannah. How are you and you family. I read the post that you and Priththika wrote on what you thought of Israel Adesanya's speech. I haven't heard it so it made me want to go and have a look. I'm glad you enjoyed it and it was great the advice you gave, especially about more descriptive words. It shows that you listened to him carefully.
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