I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Tiannah,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great start to writing a limerick. Your next step is to work on adding more rhyme to your limerick. Well done.
HI Tiannah i really like your Limerick poem it really
ReplyDeletecool and the cake looks yummy good job
and keep up the good work bye:)
Kia ora Tiannah, I really love your Limerick Poem its really cool. I also like how you put a cherry on top and it kinda looks like a cake!.GOOD JOB!!
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