I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Tiannah, I found an interesting animation you created with your buddies. It was so fascinating and I really love how you guys put an grandpa telling the story of Matariki. Great Job By Soloia
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Kia ora Tiannah,you made an interesting animation and you did so well at telling the story in your own words.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tiannah,
ReplyDeleteI found an interesting animation you created with your buddies. It was so fascinating and I really love how you guys put an grandpa telling the story of Matariki. Great Job
By Soloia