I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Tiannah this is Victoria, I really liked your stardome trip slides I like how there are 5 facts about every planet in the solour system I learned more than I ever learned about planets.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Tiannah,
ReplyDeleteYou guys worked really well as a group in finding information and writing the information in your own words. Well done. Ka Pai.
Hello Tiannah this is Victoria,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your stardome trip slides I like how there are 5 facts about every planet in the solour system I learned more than I ever learned about planets.